Girl
we watched a movie
you fidgeted alot
hard to pay attention,
when you are here
I'm no good at sappiness,
so this is the best you get
Narnia Isn't real
Neither is God
or Santa.
Mal
you fidgeted alot
hard to pay attention,
when you are here
I'm no good at sappiness,
so this is the best you get
Narnia Isn't real
Neither is God
or Santa.
Mal
posted by Canton's Lone Beatnik at 11:08:00 PM
8 Comments:
...but the Easter Bunny is real...right?
they're all real in my house, I must have my magic!
Nice work, Trever. It almost seemed too short, but watching a movie with someone you really want to be with might also seem too short. Nice effect, I wanted more as much as the speaker.
this is an interesting piece, i know the feeling, but it might be helpful to elaborate alittle more about things, while still keeping it short to keep the dual meaning
Is this fictional or do you actually not believe in God or Satan?
I don't believe in anything.
even if you don't believe in anything, how can you say that God or Satan isn't real out into the public where people can become offended to what your words say spilling out on the page. I think you should pay attention to your PUBLIC audience it's not a PRIVATE school.
I am allowed to say whatever I please about whatever I please and if i offend anyone, then so be it. Frankly, offending people doesn't bother me that much. And furthermore, If i dont believe in God or Satan, then how can people expell that out into the public and waste their breath attempting to get a point across to me.
ummm......Touching?.....
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